1) How life seems to be like a fantasy when you are younger, but when you are older every standpoint in your life turns to a new adventure when you start growing up.
2) How technology is taking away our skills to be social communicative and other stuff that we did before technology was even invented.
3) How social networking is causing a loop hole for loosing focus.
Hi Jesse! So, after class, you were mentioning that you wanted to talk more about how the internet and other media are affecting people's ability to distinguish between reality and fiction. Now, you're "juicy claim" is going to attempt to explain how/why that is happening (how media and/or the internet does this to people). Once you've condensed your thinking into a sentence or two, the next thing you want to decide is how you want to begin. You could begin by telling a personal story and then leading that into your claim (and explaining your claim). Then, you could connect your idea to one of the readings (perhaps the Facebook article?) and then providing your reader with a real world example of your claim before concluding. For Draft 1, though, all I really want to see is how you'd like to begin and your claim, carefully worded and explained. Anything beyond that is going to set you up for Draft 2. Good luck!
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